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Monday, February 2, 2009

Freewrite: Family

                                         My family is great to be around. We always think up of something that we can do when everybody has enough time to do it. Almost every day, we visit my great- grand parents. Because we all take care of them and we make sure they are okay. I love my family very much and sometimes wish that I can always stay with them. 


                                        I like to stick with my older cousins because they tell extra- funny jokes and are able to still act mature at the same time. One of my best cousins refers me as "The little sister he never had". I call him "The big brother that I never had". We talk whenever we can and talk about the things that go on in our daily lives.


                                       My youngest cousin is very cute. He is four years old and acts very spontaneous . He is the one who gets most of the attention and loves it. I treat him like I treat my little brother . He doesn't mind.


                                       My whole family enjoys spending time with each other . When there is birthdays, we go out to a restaurant. Or we just have a regular parties. Sometimes my grandmother sells handbags and jewelry . That is when the whole gang comes and stops by.We wouldn't think of anything else to do on our spare time.

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