Freewrite : What If

        What if there was no  technology.  No technology as to no one is or was trying to make it. There wouldn't be all of the fun things that children have today. Such as game systems, tv, computers, machines. clothes and shoes, or anything else. There would probably be nothing on the land of America. Just natural resources that used to be here before technology was thought of. I think that maybe there is to be technology, but, not too much. There has to be at least a little bit of work to be done by a human . Not an instrument of some sort. Maybe some other people would disagree with my opinion on  not having millions of  technology groups for everything.

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Freewrite: Family

                                         My family is great to be around. We always think up of something that we can do when everybody has enough time to do it. Almost every day, we visit my great- grand parents. Because we all take care of them and we make sure they are okay. I love my family very much and sometimes wish that I can always stay with them. 

                                        I like to stick with my older cousins because they tell extra- funny jokes and are able to still act mature at the same time. One of my best cousins refers me as "The little sister he never had". I call him "The big brother that I never had". We talk whenever we can and talk about the things that go on in our daily lives.

                                       My youngest cousin is very cute. He is four years old and acts very spontaneous . He is the one who gets most of the attention and loves it. I treat him like I treat my little brother . He doesn't mind.

                                       My whole family enjoys spending time with each other . When there is birthdays, we go out to a restaurant. Or we just have a regular parties. Sometimes my grandmother sells handbags and jewelry . That is when the whole gang comes and stops by.We wouldn't think of anything else to do on our spare time.

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